This is done in charcoal pencil, and I am less than happy with this sketch, but I’m not sure why – is it the proportions? The shading? I know I need to work on not having such heavy outlines, but my last one did, too, so I don’t think it’s that.
I tried it again, with a slightly different angle, and I like it even less.
Suggestions/ideas welcomed and encouraged.
To make up for this less-than-stellar attempt, here’s a picture of Opus impairing my ability to work/move.